Why am I qualified? When I was an intern for a literary agency, I read over 100 queries in a day and was responsible for picking potential manuscripts out of the slush pile. It’s a matter of personal taste, but I can tell you what my 3 bosses always warned against.
Please note, this service is if you already have something for me to critique. I am not writing the description for you from scratch (though I can if you purchase this service for $54 instead). You can use this pitch and query while pursuing book reviewers, but I recommend having me create a book review request package for $72 because they expect different things than agents (something I have experience with as a PR intern who organized multiple book blog tours).